The most
important part of a paragraph is the topic sentence. If it is not well stated
or does not offer any interesting theme to be discussed or analyzed, the rest
of the paragraph will not be relevant at all. Moreover, a well written paragraph
implies the combination of different types of sentences and a special attention
on the relationship between them, as well as on the structure that the
whole paragraph should have. After the teacher’s feedback, I realized that my
paragraph was not up to standard because it lacked the proper structure and
texture. I had to restate the topic sentence and change some of the supporting sentences
in order to produce a more coherent and cohesive paragraph.
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