lunes, 16 de junio de 2014

Reminder

The most important part of a paragraph is the topic sentence. If it is not well stated or does not offer any interesting theme to be discussed or analyzed, the rest of the paragraph will not be relevant at all. Moreover, a well written paragraph implies the combination of different types of sentences and a special attention on the relationship between them, as well as on the structure that the whole paragraph should have. After the teacher’s feedback, I realized that my paragraph was not up to standard because it lacked the proper structure and texture. I had to restate the topic sentence and change some of the supporting sentences in order to produce a more coherent and cohesive paragraph. 

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