domingo, 13 de julio de 2014

Summary: What is "Academic" Writing?

What is “Academic” Writing?
Acha, Nicolas
Teacher: stella Maris Saubidet Oyamburu
Language & Written Expression VI
July 13, 2014

L. Lennie Irvin
Introduction: The Academic Writing Task

Writing in college is something different to what you have been doing in school. This composition class will be focused on what “Academic” writing is like and hopefully will give you the tools you need to face the challenges you will encounter in your career.

Once you are given your first academic writing task in college, you have to know that your success depends mainly on how you understand and approach to the writing task. Indeed, the mental representation of the task makes a huge difference. Some students arrive at college with strange ideas about what they will be asked to do and others with no idea at all, but some misconceptions are general to most students and must be clarified.

Myths about Writing

These are some of the things people believe about writing and that lead to problems in their attempts to write.

Myth #1: Writing is a Formula

Writing is not a linear process. On the contrary, it is a recursive process in which we are constantly moving from one step to the other.

Myth #2: You can’t start writing until you know the end

Ideas come up as you write, you have to start writing and you will find your way.

Myth #3: Perfect First Drafts

There is no such thing as a perfect first draft. Start writing something, think about it, revise it and correct it; maybe then you can have a respectable first draft

Myth #4: some got it, I don’t­ - the genius fallacy

Of course, some geniuses had it. But the rest of us mere mortals can become good writers after some effort and study.

Myth #5: Good grammar is good writing

Good writing implies causing a particular effect upon the audience. Concentrate on the content of your work and you will have time to correct the grammar

Myth #6: The five paragraph essay

The most classic format for compositions with an introduction, three supporting paragraphs and a conclusion. Although it is a very useful format for writing an essay, it is not the only one.

Myth #7: Never use “I”

In fact, most of the times you will be asked to give your opinion and make an analysis. It is ok to use “I” in the semi-formal style of your writings.

The Academic Writing Situation   

The most common problem in novice writers is the lack of sense of the writing situation in general. The challenge for the writer is to create a context for the reader. In a speaking situation, we can use different strategies to make ourselves clear. Separated in place and time from the audience, the writer must use punctuation and word choice to convey meaning.

Looking More Closely at the Academic Writing Situation

As any other specialized writing situation, writing in college has its own codes and conventions that you have to be aware of. These are some of the aspects you have to consider.

  • Audience
  • Context
  • Message
  • Purpose
  • Genres


This is like what you have been doing for years at secondary school, but there are some differences in college. Lee Ann Carrol got to this description after a study of student writing in college:

What are usually called “writing assignments” in college might more accurately be called “literacy tasks” because they require knowledge of research skills, ability to read complex texts, understanding of key disciplinary concepts, and strategies for synthesizing, analyzing and responding critically to new information, usually within a limited time frame
Every writing assignment is an opportunity to demonstrate your knowledge and show your proficiency in the skills of thinking, interpreting and presenting. Let’s analyze the elements of the college writing “literacy task”.

Ø  Knowledge of Research Skills

One of the most important steps of your writing is carrying the necessary research. You will have to find for in depth information from different sources and keep track of them.

Ø  The ability to Read Complex Texts

Reading complex texts implies thinking critically on what you are reading. You have to be able to distinguish facts from opinions as well as biases and assumptions. Making inferences based on known information and get your readers to make the same inferences that you have made.

Ø  The Understanding of Key Disciplinary Concepts

You have to demonstrate that you know what you are talking about by applying and using the key concepts correctly in your writings.

Ø  Strategies for Synthesizing, Analyzing and Responding Critically to New Information

For every writing assignment you will be asked to deal with unfamiliar information that you have to grasp and use later in your writings.

In College, Everything’s an Argument: A Guide for Decoding College Writing Assignments

Based on a particular topic or reading, you will be asked to write an “essay” in which you will have to present an argument and support your claim with appropriate evidence.

v  Academic Writing is an Argument

Presenting an argument in college writing means to state your point of view in a persuasive way so that you win your audience’s agreement of your position.

v  Academic Writing Is an Analysis

When you are asked to write an analysis what is really expected of you is to break the subject into small parts and show how they relate to each other. The interpretation you make of this relationship will be the claim that you have to support with strong evidence.

Three Common Types of College Writing Assignments

There are different kinds of assignments based on the level of the teacher’s direction that you might receive in college. These are:
The Close Writing Assignment


  •                ICreon a character to admire or condemn?
  •           Was the south justified in seceding from the union?
These kinds of assignments are already making two counter claims so your task is to decide which one is right and find the evidence to support it.

The Semi-open Writing Assignment


  • ·         Discuss the role of law in Antigone
  • ·         Explain the relationship between character and fate in Hamlet
It asks you to analyze a particular topic or subject, arrive at some interesting insights and present your findings in the form of a claim.
 
The Open Writing Assignment


  • ·         Analyze the role of a character in Dante’s The Inferno
  • ·         What does it mean to be an “American” in the 21st century?
These tasks give you the freedom to choose your writing subject and your thesis statement. It may seem easier to write without restrictions, but you must have a good understanding of the subject matter before selecting an interesting and manageable topic for your writing.

Ø  Picking and Limiting a Writing Topic

One of the most difficult challenges in writing is to select an interesting and appropriate topic to develop. You should look for gaps and confusing items in the readings until you find a question that can be stated and then answered. Try to limit your topic to a manageable size that can be properly supported.

Three Characteristics of Academic Writing

There are certain characteristics that all teachers expect to find in your writings. Chriss Thaiss and Terry Zawaki conducted a research and found three dominant characteristics:

1-   Clear evidence that you have been persistent, open-minded, and disciplined in study.
2-   The dominance of reason over emotions or sensual perceptions.
3-   An imagined reader who is coolly rational, reading for information, and intending to formulate a reasoned response.



The Format of the Academic Essay

There are specific characteristics that your pieces of writing should have according to the assignment, but in general, the characteristics of the “Critical Essay” will serve you as a reference.

Characteristics of the Critical Essay

  • ·  It makes a point and supports it with enough evidence to be convincing.
  • ·         What it claims should be a debatable interpretation.
  • ·         It consists of an introduction, a body and a conclusion.
  • ·         Transitions between the different main points should be clear to the reader.
  • ·         It should be carefully edited to avoid grammatical mistakes.

Conclusion

You must be very conscious of the kind of tasks you are doing because your success depends on your understanding and approach to the writing assignments.

Works cited

Carroll, Lee Ann. Rehearsing New Roles: How College Students Develop as         Writers. Carbondale: Southern Illinois UP, 2002. Print.

Thaiss, Chris and Terry Zawacki. Engaged Writers & Dynamic Disciplines: Research on the Academic Writing Life. Portsmouth: Boynton/Cook, 2006. Print.

lunes, 16 de junio de 2014

Reminder

The most important part of a paragraph is the topic sentence. If it is not well stated or does not offer any interesting theme to be discussed or analyzed, the rest of the paragraph will not be relevant at all. Moreover, a well written paragraph implies the combination of different types of sentences and a special attention on the relationship between them, as well as on the structure that the whole paragraph should have. After the teacher’s feedback, I realized that my paragraph was not up to standard because it lacked the proper structure and texture. I had to restate the topic sentence and change some of the supporting sentences in order to produce a more coherent and cohesive paragraph. 

Paragraph ReWriting

Acha Nicolás & Ascolano Gustavo               
Professor Stella Maris Saubidet Oyhamburu
Language and Written Expression IV
May 23, 2014
Failing among students
In order to understand why students fail there are some important causes to be analyzed. Firstly, depression is the most common cause of school difficulties. People with depression have continuing negative thoughts about themselves and their future, and they may experience changes in their ability to concentrate and make decisions during a class. Secondly, students’ problems at home may also be an obstacle at school. If a student's family is experiencing violence, unemployment, or alcohol use by a family member, it may be difficult to concentrate on schoolwork. Lastly, the third important cause is related to the learning disabilities, which refers to conditions that interfere with gaining specific academic skills, such as reading or writing. Although these are not the only causes that lead to students’ failure, the study is based on the most common reasons. 

Working Women

Even though women have always worked in one way or another, they have increasingly become more involved in the workforce of every nation in the last fifty years. In the beginning of the 20th century, women used to perform home-based jobs such as sewing, laundry and cooking to sell on the streets. Many women were also employed in factories or as domestic service for richer families but they did not have the same opportunities than men had to be engaged in a wide variety waged work. In addition to their unpaid job at home which included cooking, cleaning and child care. Working class women had no choice but to work in order to help support their families.  Similarly, 21st century women have to take care of their household chores and children’s needs besides the job they fulfill for others, which in most cases is essential for the family sustain. However, women aspirations have shifted from female-oriented jobs to an unrestricted participation in every field. These changes removed them from the domestic sphere and introduced them into the marketplace.  They now represent almost a half of the workforce in most countries and therefore became the most powerful engine for global economic growth.

Paragraph Writing

Acha Nicolás & Ascolano Gustavo               
Professor Stella Maris Saubidet Oyhamburu
Language and Written Expression IV
May 23, 2014
Failing Among Students
In order to figure out why students fail, there are four main causes to be analyzed. Firstly, depression is one of the most common causes of school difficulties. People with depression have continuing negative thoughts about themselves and the future, and they may experience changes in their ability to concentrate and make decisions. Secondly, students also may bring their problems at home to school with them. If a student's family is experiencing violence, unemployment, or alcohol use by a family member, or any other upsetting experience, it may be difficult to concentrate on schoolwork. Thirdly, anxiety is a feeling of excessive worry about a possible danger or an uncomfortable situation that is intense enough to interfere with a person's ability to concentrate and focus. Lastly, the fourth cause is related to the learning disabilities, which refers to conditions that interfere with gaining specific academic skills, such as reading or writing.  Although these are not the only causes that lead to students’ failure, the study is based on the most common reasons.  

Working Women
Even though women have increasingly become more involved in the workforce of every nation in the last fifty years, they have always worked in one way or another.  In previous centuries, working class women had no choice but to work in order to help support their families. They used to carry out home-based jobs such as sewing, laundry and cooking to sell on the streets. Many women were also employed in factories or as domestic service for richer families. This was in addition to their unpaid job at home which included cooking, cleaning and child care. Similarly, 21st century women perform a wide variety of paid work for others, which in most cases is crucial to sustain the family; and also perform the same unpaid domestic chores. Throughout history, women have received lower wages than men for the same job. In spite of gender equality movements, sex discrimination is still usual; not only in the payment women receive but in the activities they are “welcomed” to participate.  All in all, women have historically played an important role in the development of economy.


sábado, 10 de mayo de 2014

Writing Properly

Academic Writing

In order to produce well written assignments in an Academic Style there are certain features and structures you have to contemplateThe following list includes some of the specific aspects that American university professors demand.


Ø  Consider
·         The kind of assignment
ü  Essays – Reports – Presentations – Reflective Pieces – Summaries – Annotated Bibliographies
ü  Read your module handbooks
Ø  Understand
·         The learning outcomes of the task
ü  What you are being asked
ü  What is expected of you
ü  Interpret and answer the question appropriately

Ø  Employ
ü  Formal language
ü  Correct grammar
ü  Linkers and conjunctions
ü  Well structured sentences and paragraphs
ü  Proper punctuation and spelling
ü  References in the style of the subject
Ø  Allow
ü  Re-reading
ü  Editing
ü  Proofreading


Structure of a well written paragraph

Ø  Shape
ü  Indent or skip a line
Ø  Topic sentence
ü  One central idea per paragraph
ü  Think of an interesting topic and give your opinion  
ü  No details- General- Thesis statement
Ø  Body
·         General
ü  All ideas connected with the topic sentence idea
ü  Supporting ideas/ arguments for the topic sentence
ü  Order of importance considering the strongest arguments
ü  Order of chronology considering events
·         Length
ü  Any
ü  Consider the kind of writing
·         Details
ü  Importance of your thesis statement
ü  Reasons that support your ideas
ü  Examples and Theories to discuss the topic
Ø  Flow
ü  Bridges/Linkers- connect ideas to each other
ü  Avoid repetition
ü  Key terms- can be repeated
ü  Shorter is better
ü  Connect the following paragraph (if there is one) with a bridge to the topic or to the previous paragraph
ü  Sentence connects to sentence- Paragraph connect to paragraph
ü  Linking logically
Ø  Closing sentence           
ü  Restate the topic sentence- keep your audience thinking
ü  Conclude with a clear statement



Misa, Ulises
Acha, Nicolas



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Introduction to Academic Writing - Edge Hill University. Retrieved on 9 May 2014 from

Writing skills -The paragraph. English video lessons. Retrieved on 9 May 2014 from

Parts of a paragraph - English academic writing introduction. English video lessons.
Retrieved on 9May 2014 from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCuExRE6N-4






jueves, 24 de abril de 2014

Nicolas Acha
Professor: Stella Maris Saubidet Oyhamburu 
LEE 4- 41 
April 20, 2014
Portfolio

Writing and Writers are a Must
When I was given the assignment of writing some kind of composition with the heading “writing and writers are a must” and all the freedom to write whatever I wanted, I thought that it couldn’t be so difficult, just try to think a few peculiarities about writers in general; what is it that moves a writer to write and share his work, thinking on their context and personal experiences, but then I found that it was more difficult than I was expecting. I started writing something about what would it be like to sit in front of a blank shit of paper and try to write, finding myself in the same position. Then I tried to write about the qualities that a writer should have and later about the importance of putting down in words your ideas. These were three different attempts that led me to a dead end road. It was time to hand in the papers and I didn’t even have a draft, but thanks to the teacher’s explanation, I realized that it was impossible to write without considering what type of text you are writing and who the audience will be. This awareness raising exercise carried by the teacher was significant for me in the sense that my failed attempts to write are a proof of how important it is to have these aspects in mind in order to produce a communicative piece of writing.
      In order to write a good piece of writing, there are certain steps followed by writers in general. The writing process involves the steps of:  pre-writing, drafting, revision, editing and publishing. During the pre-writing step the writer finds the topic he wants to develop through free writing and brainstorming, based on the audience and purpose of the writing. I believe that I was not able to overcome this first step in the writing process because I did not know whom I was writing to and with what purpose. The lack of a specific audience and purpose makes impossible the selection of the topic and ideas to develop, as well as the register and form of the writing. 


This picture taken from my notebook shows my failed attempts to make a draft.


lunes, 21 de abril de 2014

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